焦点简讯:中南大学23年考博英语作文怎么写及24年备考建议

2023-04-17 10:07:34 来源 : 网络

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2023年中南大学考博英语写作练习

今天小赛挑选了一篇正在备考2023年中南大学博士入学的学员作文，希赛全职讲师已经对此进行了精细点评。

点评的批改内容在下方，结合点评文本我们一起来学习一下。

点评文本2023·写作精炼

学员作文展示及点评(备注：练习均要求手写，本文为识别版，若有错误，同学们及时指正)

Companys focus on work Experience

In recent years, more and more companys focus on work experience in recruitment, So it is necessary for gradnate stndents to gain work experience before graduation.

As a matter of fact, having work experience not only serves to hunt jobs but also help to enhance gradnates aspects of ability, such as the communication with others, the proper behaviour in sociery and the professional skills in practise. Besides, when they gradute from universities, They may be faced with many problems,and work having experience could help them to solve the setbacks more suitable. At the same time, as a job-seeker, if they have a abundent and excellent work experience, it is help(helpful) for them to getthe offers.

In my view, there are several advires how to manage to do work .Firstiy, they can join the studentunion when they in colleage, which help to excercise the behaviors and skills. For instance, they could learn writing skills in publicity department. Secodly, in the last ytar in colleage, the gradnate should fake a internships .In this carotion, they can enter an expected firm to wok, which can acclmuate work experienre and understand the work than before. Lust but not least, when they work in company, it is essential to work hard and stand on solid ground. To be exac they should devote themselves thorbiyhly to their work.

学员得分：约15-20分

讲师点评：总体观点明确，逻辑清晰，卷面整洁，不错。不足之处有一些表达不够正确，还有语法上面的小问题，需要多多细心，加油!

逐句点评

1. 修改前： companys

问题：拼写不准确

修改后：companies

2.修改前：but also help to enhance gradnates aspects of ability

问题：表述累赘

修改后：enhance abilities in various aspectssuch as...

3.修改前：They may be faced with many problems

问题：中式表达

修改后：这里可以直接用working experience

4.修改前：and work having experience could help them to solve the setbacks more suitable.

问题：：中式表达

修改后：solve the setbacks more suitable，这个是指更好的解决不足吗?英语中一被不这么用，可以说 in a more suitable way

5.修改前：there are several advires how to manage to do work .

问题：可以有更高分的表达

修改后：这里应该不是to do work，应该是gain experience before graduation哦!

6. 修改前：when they in colleage,

问题：用词不符合文化使用环境

修改后：college更多的是指美国的一些专科学院戰用university更合适一些

7. 修改前： thorbiyhly

问题：表述重复

修改后：dovote to 本身就有全身心投入的意思

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